My latest story written for a Locution contest. This time the prompt was to take a first line from another work, be it story, movie, song, etc, and use it as your first line. I chose Peter Pan.
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Locution, Issue 3
Monday, October 27, 2008
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Ooh, I liked this, nice use of the Peter Pan line!
ReplyDeleteWas a bit confused by the women in the village saying "hardly proper" about a widow, when there's clearly been a war on, or at least that was the impression given, that this was war-torn England. Widows must've been commonplace!
Oops, entirely forgot this was here. >_<
ReplyDeleteYeah, someone else commented that on the first draft. The "hardly proper" was meant to be a comment on the fact that she was living alone instead of moving back in with her mother, not that she was a widow. Not sure if I managed to fix that in the edit that went into the zine, but hopefully~